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beautiful

being a musician, i think this song's supposed simplicity is the heart of it's beauty. The ringing of the notes with the background reverb was amazing. however, in regards to the hiccup at :21, to me it sounded percussive, and when i heard it i wanted to hear more. If possible, I would add a very light snare drum part for parts of the song. maybe add some very deep bass drum, and a very small boys voice or womans voice singing the lyrics to your hymn. other than that, just fix the tiny mess-ups in the 1:23-1:27 area, and this song is good to go. nine out of ten from me!

SatoDraygonFist2 responds:

Wow! Thanks for your reviews! I'll certainly look into it. They are all fantastic ideas, but the fact remains that I just don't have the resources to upload another fantastic recording. I mean, I'm trying hard and tripping over myself to get it done....we'll see what happens.

And the snare part/singing...we'll see. I don't want to overload the song. But thanks for the suggestions! They mean a lot!

good track.

don't let it get to your head, but I think this is the best funk track on newgrounds currently. one thing though: you get a nine cause i don't think I like your vocalist. If it's you, I'm sorry, but stick to the music bit. find yourself another vocalist. However, on a positive note, I like the WAY the vocalist sings it. Like, the melody, you know? I want to see your work at the number one slot, cause whoever is there right now doesn't deserve it.

first login

this is my first login in about a year...just to review this song. i lurk around in the audio portal looking for anything interesting, and i stumble upon this. being a musician myself, i really really appreciate your voice, and dont want to dictate anything about your music, but if you added a simple drum part, it could be so much closer to "radio ready". but as it is, I love it. where I live there are no talented musicians to play with, and I wish to play with someone as talented as yourself.

hania responds:

Hey! Thanks for the review and Welcome Back to the Login world of NG ;)

I totally agree with you regarding the drum part - it would certainly make the song more "radio ready" . Do you know anyone with a kit? :)

I'm glad that you like the piece without the drums too though - simplistic piano/vocal songs are always fun to make.
-hania
xox

very jam-style

I really liked it. I wish I could record guitar on my computer but it's a macintosh, and I only have fruity loops for windows. I really liked your drum beat, and found it hooking. BTW thx again for the review...I don't get many.

Stealth-Emergence responds:

hmm well i don't know why you voted so low on originality, i would have loved for you to have broken down your explanation for this in your review, maybe you can PM me tell me what tracks you feel this borrows from!

Thanks for your review man

Peace Out

Stealth

interesting

i liked it up until you started using the gun sound effect on every note. it could have done without that. i think a short loop would be better. by the way the ghosty sound was a nice touch

Plusle responds:

Ya, I shouldn't make it on every note:(

Thanks for your review anyway!

this is a sweet song for your first try

i downloaded it, and its better than my stuff. of course, mine is a different style completely, but you mix trance with techno quite well. its like harcore electronica plus ambient at the same time, turning it into trance at the same time. keep it up!

jazzifiedfizzle responds:

thanks man, glad you liked it. im going to try to make some more soon.

pretty sweet

i really liked it, it just wasnt like...diverse enough

wtf

I liked it, except for the cow bell. other than that it was sweet. can you make me a copy of this w/o cowbell? i wanna download, but just not this version

PERVOK responds:

sure, i will.

ill e-mail it when im done.
thanks for the review.

yeah, that albino_ravenclock sure does love his guitars

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